Oh wow, good stuff! Very angsty and nicely constructed. And I love that choice not to reveal anything about who died, or how, or why. It could even have been Dief! (Which yes, kills me, but you act in the service of angst and for that you are forgiven!) Great job on this! I'm really looking forward to seeing what you come up with for the challenge!
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Date: 2007-09-23 12:59 pm (UTC)